tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-860246989240352409.post6492254540150838966..comments2023-09-20T05:56:08.058-07:00Comments on That's No Way to Make Friends.: Always Be Closing (rough)grahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06664695227003175322noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-860246989240352409.post-27842783683786017362015-09-10T00:09:01.785-07:002015-09-10T00:09:01.785-07:00I will. I have ideas for moving this one forward.I will. I have ideas for moving this one forward.grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06664695227003175322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-860246989240352409.post-75168727952839365662015-09-05T11:25:32.402-07:002015-09-05T11:25:32.402-07:00You have something cooking with the breaks in the ...You have something cooking with the breaks in the second stanza. Free verse, modern language, but with whitmanish/new testament linebreaks and cadences. My gut also says "re read Hugo's epistolary poems" when you re-write this.Robert Lashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14126062728025050650noreply@blogger.com