Monday, 12 January 2009

Swansea:

I have met so many girls
who've known you far too long
and whose tired eyes would do
so much better
elsewhere.

This is something we have in common.

2 comments:

Ryan A. Johnson said...

I think this is really good. But you should make the last sentence more concise.

graham said...

word. I was having some grammar trouble with it and then had to go to work.