That's No Way to Make Friends.: Swansea:

Monday 12 January 2009

I have met so many girls
who've known you far too long
and whose tired eyes would do
so much better
elsewhere.

This is something we have in common.

Ryan A. Johnson said...: I think this is really good. But you should make the last sentence more concise.; 13 January 2009 at 01:47
graham said...: word. I was having some grammar trouble with it and then had to go to work.; 13 January 2009 at 07:47